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|  | Chapter 46
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Chapter 46 review!
I had to lable Chaucer in the banner 'cause I realized... "No one's gonna know what he looks like!"
And AWWW!! Zidane is so cute XD "I'd still say yes"
He's such a doll... His personality is easy to write because the odds are, he's going to help. He IS the good guy, it's what he does!
Chapter 47
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| | Re: Chapter 46
« Reply #1 on Jan 5, 2009, 8:40pm » | |
Eclipse should've melted Chaucer a long time ago.....
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« Reply #2 on Jan 6, 2009, 12:47am » | |
XD
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| | Re: Chapter 46
« Reply #3 on Jan 2, 2010, 3:44pm » | |
1) Pricilla's Palace
should palace be capitalized?
2) They would be forced to go back to the island, too. (and) Things weren't looking good, though
is the comma needed?
3) that Island
is island supposed to be capitalized?
4) falconers perch
falconers(') perch
5) but it's heat
no need for an apostrphe
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