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|  | Chapter 47
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Chapter 47
Incase anyone is wondering (and somhow didn't get it) all those names Eclipse calls Drake are vampires from variouse sources XD
Much props to:
Anne Rice
L.J. Smith
Stephenie Meyer
and Bran Stoker for a few of the names! A couple of the others are vampire characters in one of my Original Fictions.
And yeah! That's Drake looking mad as HELL, and then Zidane going "Eee... I'm standing in the middle and they both know magick...." and Kuja going "Awwww, I don't give a damn!" He's happy to be in a top banner (even if he does have Sephiroth hair... dammit)
Chapter 48
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| | Re: Chapter 47
« Reply #1 on Jan 5, 2009, 8:45pm » | |
What a good good-bye note........and whoever Kuja's wife is, she must have a lot of patience....
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| | Re: Chapter 47
« Reply #2 on Jan 2, 2010, 4:17pm » | |
1) He'd probably drag himself back her
He'd probably drag himself back her(e)
2) It will work out better this wat.
this just makes no sense
3) a wise decishion.
is the word above supposed to be decision?
4) Genome's hadn't
should the s and the apostrphe be switched?
5) Kuja walked confidentially though the hallways.
should confidentially be confidentally?
6) Mikoto was supposed to be in the village, too
is the comma neccessary?
7) Zidane's Jet
should Jet be lower case?
8) Heh... But Garnet would have to come out and...
Zidane is speaking so shouldn't Garnet be Dagger?
9) They could be taught tricks and worked only to make their master's happy.
why do you need the apostrphe s?
10) “We had to replace the door.” Ellipsis blinked a few times. “... The door?”
would it be less confusing if you put everything after Ellipsis on the next line?
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