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Chapter 4
Here we have Severo!
Severo was breifly in OMWF and people seemed very intriqued by him! He is a more important character in TRLF and will be in the third story
Chapter 5
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| | Re: Chapter 4
« Reply #1 on Aug 26, 2008, 11:26am » | |
O.o Drake vs Yan. I hated those little buggers! Always snorting me out of battle. I want the hell was with them spam casting Comet to know end. Grrrrrrr!
Anyway again I am the first to review this chappy! Sweet!
Great job Ravyn! Very well written with good detail. THe plot just flows along seamlessly. Drake's past is looking more and more interesting as I read this!
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« Reply #2 on Aug 26, 2008, 2:27pm » | |
Graci!
YES! THE YANS!
Much loathing for the yans... always managed to push at least one character out of battle... I had to use Freya and her Jump ability a LOT, just to keep someone in!
And Comet. Grrrr.... takes a special patience to HP battle yans. Takes very little to shoot them with an arrow!
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« Reply #3 on Aug 28, 2008, 8:55am » | |
Hehehe! I think every FFIX player thinks of Yans when they think of the snowy regions in the game. O_o
Then they think of PAIN! O_O
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« Reply #5 on Aug 29, 2008, 5:26pm » | |
I think he would be smarter than freeze out in the snow...
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« Reply #6 on Sept 3, 2008, 2:05pm » | |
Severo is back, I'm glad he gets a bigger part in this story.
If only Drake and Zidane knew that Eclispe was getting his power from Drake then the battle would've been a whole lot quicker.
I am liking Drake's story (his history).
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Graci, munchin!
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